Monday, April 6, 2009

Chrissy: i've been inspired

I've beein inspired by friend Jon to put a little of my poetry up :)
Its no where near as good as his
so you should go read his too.
Here it is:
No pit is deeper
Nor blacker or cursed
Than thy great reaper
In which I'm submersed
Release me! Reviled beast
For I have learned well
That when the clouds appear eased
Their anger will swell
Catch me not upon thy claw
Let thy teeth not tear
How much hate would you draw?
How much claim of my fear?
No, leave in my lightless pit
For on my brow, death doth sit.
...
Tell me what you think
its a little darker than i remember it being...
but oh well. I've never really tried to write a happy poem... :P

2 Comments:

Blogger Ericrazy said...

i've never liked poetry, but this was nice. nice in that morbid 'erica is sick' kind of way. :P it reminds me of a certain story about a certain disney movie that i'm supposed to be writing...

*gold star*

:]

April 15, 2009 at 1:05 PM  
Blogger Jonathan A. E. E. Baker said...

Stunning word choice! Can I hear some more?

May 4, 2009 at 3:02 PM  

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