Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Chrissy: Peterella

This is for friend Erica.
She and I are plot buddies :)
We always bounce ideas off of each other over facebook and text
haha its rather fun.
Sometimes it takes us DAYS to come up with even a name.
We're having a competition to see who can finish their story first.
And she is winning by about 50 pages XD
This particular idea was originally a mix of Cinderella and Peter Pan combined. 
However, our extensive discussion it has changed a lot!
But I have yet to change the name.
So here's a little snippet (don't worry if it doesn't really make sense)

"Stupid Lost Boys," I muttered to myself as I stomped through Neverland's thick underbrush. They were all for fun and games and adventure until it came time to actually help someone. Then they, of course, care for none of it! Typical boys.

And so I continued by myself, not knowing where I was going but knowing that I had to get SOMEWHERE. Justin wasn't going to go unrescued. I balked slightly thinking about the fact that I was suppose to be the one to save him. Me, boring, unnoticeable Macey. Lucky for me I had read enough adventure books as a young girl that I was sure I could come up with something.  My strategy thus far? Go with the flow and improvise.

I sighed at how pathetic and completely useless I was.

As if to further prove my point I tripped. With a screech I tumbled head first down the side of a slick slope. I threw my arms out trying to grasp something that would help me stop. But Neverland was out to get me and I could actually feel the ground beneath me shift upwards, increasing my momentum. Now summersaulting out of control I swore I would get my revenge. I'd start a forest fire, chop down trees, litter...

"Oof!" my plotting was cut short as my body slammed against something hard. Groaning I pushed myself up into a sitting position. Not the most pleasant of ways to stop, but I would take it. Placing a hand on my now throbbing head I looked around. Straight into the eyes of a giant bird like beast.

tell me what you think!


Blogger Ericrazy said...



i love it, babe!
i could actually picture myself tromping disgruntledly through the mystical tropics of neverland! ^^

July 29, 2009 at 10:13 PM  
Blogger Anna Kristine said...

Ooh...I love it...but ahhh! What's going to happen!? ;)

PS Peter Pan and Cinderella are two of my favorite stories! :)

August 1, 2009 at 8:35 PM  

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